The Story Continues

From: Sophia Mascia [mailto:ink-blood@hotmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, October 12, 2005 12:08 PM
To: Jerry Johnson
Subject: RE: okay...it's still unfinished and you've already seen mostof this, but what do u think so far


so Jerry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i just got out of class- i had my teacher read it outloud instead of me- since my voice gets shaky in front of people... but, people really loved it! it made people laugh!!!!!!!! and smile and people reacted passionately to MY STORY JERRY!!! THEY LOVED MY STORY like people were like i love this about it i love that-- the main critiscisms were WHY??????? like what are all the undertones was the question and such... but they like it!!!!! its like they reallyWANTED TO KNOW the why when they asked... you know?!!?!!? like it got them into it -- wow, cool--so they had the same critisicms same as you and also the disjointed scenes... which i agree with and also sortof make the images less daunting - like spread it out a bit like you said bnut yeah-- you know whats funny my teacher was like talking about the ppl in the story he said "i LOVE how intense these people are- you know someone who hasen't moved for two days has serious issues" and i'm thinking haha yeah i really relate to them so i guess i DO have issues lol... hehe...